Cerion's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[my sfdt collab part]

Not half bad

As far as sticks fighting DBZ-style goes, absolutely nothing new or creative in any way nowadays, but as far as this individual movie goes, the animation was very smooth and wasn't too bad lengthwise. Despite getting lazy at the end, It was overall quite a bit better then lots of the completely half-assed submissions involving stickmen.

threassance responds:

thanks. just kinda played arround with it for a while. and i do have a series going too, incase you wanna see it :D

[Life's a Beach]

...Never trusted crabs or umbrellas...

It was really well done, I can see your work getting better and better each time you make a new one. I thought the idea of an unrated version quite humorous, but I the overlapping music after pressing replay got a bit annoying. My recommendation is to make the music start 1 keyframe later, and to make the first keyframe of the movies to have the "stop all sounds" action attached to it so the music wont overlap itself.

rodstew2 responds:

Thanks, and I was wondering why the music did that, I'll try to fix it.

[Rocky and Rambo:Star Wars]

As expected

Some parts in my opinion, seemed a bit rushed, but it was overall a job very well done. I don't need to tell you that I expect the finished movie to be great.

rodstew2 responds:

Thank you.

[KARMATRON]

Subtítulos de inglés serían apreciados

English subtitles would be appreciated, allowing non-Hispanic/non-Latino people to understand the text and therefore the story much much better asides from educated guesses. The animation itself was very well done.

SERATO responds:

good in truth I include/understand the misfortune and of today in ahead it will use subtitulos in ingles for great mayoria in this pagina that are not Latin thanks to comment

[The Dead's Locomotion]

Room for improvment

I have to say, I know how much effort you put into this this semester but I'd bet that if you were able to redo this I'm sure you'd be able to make it better, or at least make the people more detailed like the zombies at the end. Good job overall.

rodstew2 responds:

Thanks for the responce, and you're right, if I could redo it I'd make the overall animation better.

[That's So Cliché: Pen]

great ending

I never saw it coming, great job.

Emerald-Fox responds:

The twists are my calling card. Glad you liked it.

[- defender -]

Koolmovies demo?

If that what you used to make this than good for you I've never been able to use that software to make anything good.

Frenzy responds:

Lol Thanks! And yes thats waht I use!

~ Z

[Rick Versus Vegeta]

too short

maybe if you added a prologue as to why rick wants to kill vegeta, how he became par with vegeta, etc.

I know there's the authors notes but it still leaves lots of good, juicy detail out that could make this great.

steelsoldier responds:

Ill do this in next time i submit one animation i promise, currently this was more of a test demonstration of what i could do, and it turned to a short animation and so i added an ending to it